Rein
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 |  Subject: Draufgänger - Doll  Wed Jun 02, 2010 3:04 am | |
| General Information-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Name: Draufgänger Medium:- Spoiler:
a old ring that he is always using 
Release phrase: "Zeige Dich, Draufgänger" Family: Earth Doll--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Appearance: - Spoiler:
Personality: Hes a very astute and tricky doll, extremely loyal to its master. As what he likes most is to sleep and to play, he and his master are a great team together. He doesn't care about joining his master doing bad jokes and pranks around. Hes not the kind that usually starts a talk, but really enjoys talking to humans. Habits: He usually stays in his released doll form by his master side most of time. He would rather take a defensive position before really aiming for the enemy. Ability: To control and manipulate the earth around him to protect his master and attack his enemies. (40 m diameter around the doll) Attacks:- Spoiler:
-High Senses-
He feels through the ground vibrations all the presences around (flying units are not detected), as well their location and distance from him while inside his range area.
cooldown 2
-Rudel-
He creates clones (4, to summon more the charge time is raised by each one added) from the earth to fight.
Charge 1 duration 3 cooldown 5
-Schild-
A large wall take place to protect him from attacks from one direction
duration 1 cooldown 2
-Prime Schild-
A golden energy shield appear around him, like a sphere, protecting him from all directions.
charge 1 duration 2 cooldown 2
-Faswalk-
He dissolves into earth to fastly appear somewhere else inside his range.
cooldown 3
-Spüle-
He sinks in the ground, alone or with his master, to move and attack his enemies from below
Charge 1 duration 3 cooldown 5 - Alone
Charge 2 duration 2 cooldown 5 - with his master
-Wolf Bite-
Two mouths came from the ground aiming for the enemy legs, trying to grab them and then hardening, to hold the enemy there.
duration 1 cooldown 3
-Wolf Trap-
A large hole appear under the enemy like a big mouth trapping him inside it.
charge 2 duration 2 cooldown 4
-Great Howl-
He howls high before a large tremor take places along with heavy sandstorm, making it impossible to recognize who is who until you're already facing the person inside it.
charge 2 duration 3 cooldown 8
-Fangeru-
He creates small fangs (more like small knifes, 25) to attack his enemy aiming then at him.
cooldown 3
-Stone Spiker-
Several stone spears rush out of the ground. Since this spell also causes a small earthquake, any target whose feet are on the ground will have a hard time dodging this attack.
cooldown 5
-Meinruf-
He controls with his mind a large amount of stones that came from the ground like a wave.
charge 2 duration 4 cooldown 10
Core Form:- Spoiler:
it transform itself into two fighting gloves 
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Rein
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| | Subject: Re: Draufgänger - Doll Wed Jun 02, 2010 6:26 pm | |
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Shorin
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| | Subject: Re: Draufgänger - Doll Wed Jun 02, 2010 8:36 pm | |
| -For starters I am going to need you to expand on your ability, its too broad. To what extent can your doll manipulate earth and give a logical reason as to how it can see and manuever underground without hindrance.
-Second, you have 12 techniques which is way more than is needed and probably allowed. Tone it down to no more than four. Also go into as much detail as you can with your techniques because if you are too vague and too broad they will not be accepted. | |
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Rein
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| | Subject: Re: Draufgänger - Doll Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:19 pm | |
| - Shorin wrote:
- -For starters I am going to need you to expand on your ability, its too broad. To what extent can your doll manipulate earth and give a logical reason as to how it can see and manuever underground without hindrance.
-Second, you have 12 techniques which is way more than is needed and probably allowed. Tone it down to no more than four. Also go into as much detail as you can with your techniques because if you are too vague and too broad they will not be accepted. -That is already explained there did u read? -Im adding more details to it, but some of them can't really be explained more And i read somewhere around that there isn't any tech limit. | |
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Armond
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| | Subject: Re: Draufgänger - Doll Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:28 pm | |
| No limit on techs.
Ability is very broad, but because of the amount of techs then all of those techs are the extent of his earth manipulating abilities.
Approved. | |
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