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Satoru

Satoru


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Join date : 2010-06-01

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race: Shinigami
rank: 9th division Lieutenant

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PostSubject: Chikyū sōchaku-sha   Chikyū sōchaku-sha I_icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 9:37 pm

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~SPIRIT~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Name:Chikyū sōchaku-sha (Earth fire Wielder)

Visual Age:28

Looks:A white wolf spirit,with red paws and a red mohawk with black curvy streaks coming from the top of his eyes. thats all there is to it the picture will describe the rest.
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Likes:Rocky, sandy terrain areas.

Habits:Humming alot

Personality:Is more of a mugger type but loves and always will protect Satoru. He is sometimes mean and doesn't like to play around as much but when Satoru is around he lightens up alot.

Inner World: To describe this place is, picture a desert, made up of only black sand. Now imagine, 3 maybe 5 volcanoes off in the distance that have lava flowing from them. The sky is a reddish orange and the heat is intense. The volcanoes are circuling the area to the point where they are cutting it off, as the lava flows in a ring around the world.

Connection to Master: Satoru's and Chikyū sōchaku-sha relationship is like a best friend to best friend relationship, sure they have fights, but the seem to get over it really, really quickly.

Similarities:They are similar because they both love the heat, and the both love a good fight when they see one.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Sealed~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Type:Katana

Subtype:Dual wield (i already registered)

Looks: A regular katana with a curve. It has a brown handle that is woven into a diamond pattern. The second one looks like a normal katana with a curve and has a black handle.
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~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Shikai~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Release Phrase:Come play with me Chikyū sōchaku-sha

Looks: Along curved sword stretching to about 7 feet in length and 1 foot in width. It is brown bladed and has a brown handle. On the blade is a red hexagon design pattern that goes all over it. It as the Yin Yang symbol near the bottom of the blade. the second blade, on the right is white bladed with the same symbol on it as the one on the zanpakuto on the left in the picture.

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Family:Earth and Fire

Special Ability:Satoru's previous strength which is unbelievable is increased when his shikai is activated, and i mean increased. Increased meaning the zanpakuto increases satoru's strength to be more than the strength of 100 men on steroids. This ability does not require reiatsu, but it is somewhat recommended.

Techs:
Jishin(Earthquake): Satoru smashes the ground with his earth zanpakuto and creates a huge earthquake that makes an enemies movements unstable and slows them down.This goes in all directions about 100 yards. Cooldown 3 post Duration 2 post. Note*This skill is not reiatsu based.

Atomikku Kiretsu(Atomic Fissure): Satoru shoots his zanpakuto forward, and brings it to a sudden hault. It then creates a massive amount of earth (rock) that shoots toward his enemy.A more detailed description is, this attack creates huge ridges in the ground that stick out and are sharp at the tips. It stretches to about 40 feet and sticks up from the ground to about 10 feet. Cooldown 3 post duration 1 post. Note*This skill is not reiatsu based.

Faiau~ōru(firewall): Satoru creates a wall of fire that sheilds him and his allies from any upcoming attacks for 1 turn. It surrounds satoru and his allies. Cooldown 4 post duration 1 post.

Nenshō(Combustion): Satoru slams his white bladed sword in the ground and a massive amount of fire explodes from the ground. This stretches, in height, about 50 feet, and in length about 40 feet. Note*This skill is not reiatsu based.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Bankai~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Release Phrase: (optional)

Looks: (Same rules as before apply)

Family:

Special Ability: (What can you do while in Bankai? ONE ability.)

Techs.


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Shorin

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Join date : 2010-05-14

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PostSubject: Re: Chikyū sōchaku-sha   Chikyū sōchaku-sha I_icon_minitimeWed Jun 02, 2010 8:47 pm

For the record if you are going to bump your topic please do not copy and paste your application as it not only spams but makes things look extremely confusing, anyway moving on..

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Special Ability:Satoru's previos strength which is unbelievable is increased when his shikai is activated, and i mean increased increased.
Your ability needs to be in detail just saying its “ increased increased” does not give anyone any specific indications of what degree your strenght is improved. Describe how much stronger you get by making reasonable comparisons like as strong as an ox or as mighty as 100 men, etc. Also give a reasonable explanation on how your zanpaktou allows you to become stronger, is it throguh reiatsu?, manipulating muscle tissue? Etc..

Now for your techniques:

Quote :
Jishin(Earthquake): Satoru smashes the ground with his earth zanpakuto and creates a huge earthquake that makes an enemies movements unstable and slows them down. Cooldown 3 post Duration 2 post
For your Jishin technique gives this a reasonbale range for area of effect and describe how much an enemies movement would be slowed. Perahps expressing this as a percentage would be easiest.

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Atomikku Kiretsu(Atomic Fissure): Satoru shoots his zanpakuto forward, and brings it to a sudden hault. It then creates a massive amount of earth (rock) that shoots toward his enemy. Cooldown 3 post duration 1 post
How big is this massive amount of earth, and up to how far can it be shot?
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Satoru

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race: Shinigami
rank: 9th division Lieutenant

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PostSubject: Re: Chikyū sōchaku-sha   Chikyū sōchaku-sha I_icon_minitimeWed Jun 02, 2010 9:19 pm

I fixed it.
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Enrya

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PostSubject: Re: Chikyū sōchaku-sha   Chikyū sōchaku-sha I_icon_minitimeWed Jun 02, 2010 9:27 pm

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