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Valentina Volpe

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PostSubject: Zorro de la Tempestad   Fri May 21, 2010 5:30 am

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Sealed~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Name: Zorro De La Tempestad

Type: Katana

Looks: Zorro de La Tempestad, when sealed, is a four foot long katana. The guard is a bright silver color with a golden yellow sheen. It's shaped like a seven pointed star with a jagged arc coming from in between each point. The handle is wrapped in bright yellow silk with a bit of a light blue tinge to it. The blade itself is polished to perfection and has a lightning bolt shaped design that runs the length of the blade. The sheathe is made of fine ebony with yellow accents.

Sub-type: none

Camo:
none

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Resurreccion~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Release Phrase: "Crash down with thundering jaws, Zorro De La Tempestad"

Representation: Fox

Aspect of Death: Carnal Desire

Family: Lightning

Looks: When first summoned, four large, dark clouds begin to move in, blotting
out the sky. (The clouds are just regular dark storm clouds, folks o.o
nothing special. >.>) A bolt of spiritual pressure, condensed to
resemble a massive burst of lightning, envelops her, triggering her
transformation. Her mask fragment enveloped her head, becoming a helmet like structure that is shaped like a fox's skull. Her body becomes overed in a light coat of silver fur that hardens her hierro to match that of La Cero Espada. Her legs buckle into a new shape, becoming more animal like in appearence. The jaws on her helm open and close like normal jaws, giving her the ability to fire her ceros from her mouth if she can't from her hands. Her primary weapon is the Naginata she weilds. The
blade surges with an electrical current that delivers a powerful jolt
when it comes in contact with the flesh of her enemy. The jolt it
delivers is usually anywhere between 500-1000 volts of concentrated
electricity. Her agujas de acero deliver a weak yet paralyzing 200-450
volt shock.


Special Ability:
Agujas De Acero (Steel Needles) : Her fur Hardens to thin needles which she can fire at an enemy. Each needle is charged with static
electricity. If the needle sticks into the flesh of an enemy, it can
deliver a nasty jolt that may cause paralysis The needles take two posts to reform after the first set is fired, and she can fire up to 100 needles in one set. The amount of needles in Val's body are endless as long as she's in her released state. As long as Val has fur, she'll have her needles.


Techs:


Name - Tormenta del Juicio (Storm of Judgement)
Attributes: Damage
Class: Reiatsu
'
She leaps into the air and by spinning her body, her fur and tails
create a massive thunderstorm that takes on the form of a hurricane.
When it hits the opponent, (ie: When the lightning storm comes in contact with it's target) it delivers nearly half a million volts of
pure concentrated electricity. The storm can cover nearly fifty feet,
but the majority of the damages is caused in the first fifteen feet of
the storm. Val has full control over the lightning and can curve it and aim it at will'

Post Durations: 3 posts
Cooldown: 6 posts

Name - Trueno Del Rugido (Thundering Roar)
Attributes: Damage
Class: Reiatsu
'
Valentina inhales deeply, then lets out a thundering roar that creates
a massive Shock wave. The blast can only reach about twenty feet in
diameter, but may do serious damage to those who are caught in range.
The attack is nearly fatal due to the massive damage it can cause. The shock wave alone, if hit point blank, can shatter bones and scorch flesh. However, if
it strikes at a distance, it may only leave minor burns and lacerations
at the most'

Post Durations: 1 post
Cooldown: 3 posts

Name: Anni Cero
Attributes:
Damage
Class:
Reiatsu
'A cero only used by the espada within their first release, it is
similar to the gran ray cero as the Espada in question will have to mix their
own blood with the Cero to increase it's power. But it is also enhanced even
further by adding their element to the mix with each element, each element adds
a different type of power. By adding their elemental Reiatsu it increases the
power
of the cero dramatically, of course each power varies due to the user.
The cero is Bright yellow in color and is a medium-long range cero,
only reaching 10 meters in distance.
Lightning = Increases the cero's potential to smash through an enemies defense
and as the explosion takes place it sends out a wave of electricity shocking
any opponents foolish enough to be around it'

Cool down: 4 posts
Duration:
Cero fires in one post. The effects of the electric shock lasts for two posts.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Segunda Etapa~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Release Phrase: Cólera de la Diosa del Desierto

Looks: In her second release, Valentina takes on the shape of a large nine
tailed fox. The markings on her body glow bright yellow and
occasionally arc with an electric current. She stands at almost seven
feet tall in her final form. Each tail is nearly five feet long and
surge with a powerful electric current. She is incapable of human
speech due to her vulpine muzzle. Her eyes become empty and vacant. In her mind, only destruction of her enemy exists. Her entire body is covered in a
statically charged pelt of thick silver fur that will shock anyone who comes
in contact with her body.
The fur works also as heavy armor, strengthening her hierro tenfold.

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Special Ability: In her final form, Val can summon a thunderstorm out of even the
clearest skies, and gains full control over electricity. She calls down
the thunderbolts with specialized barks and growls, the intensity of
the bolt it decided by the intensity of her cry.
Techs:
Name:
El Granizo del Relámpago
Attributes: Damage
Class: Reiatsu
'The attack only can occur if she is airborne. Val lets out a
loud series of barks and howls, and releases a storm of five to ten
thunderbolts from her body. They surround an enemy while a large bolt
comes down the center to strike the trapped enemy'

Cool down: 4 posts
Duration: 1 posts


Name: El Resplandor Cero
Attributes: Damage
Class: Reiatsu
'This cero is a reverse of the Cero Oscura. It is bright white in colour. The cero is summoned by Val charging it in her mouth like a normal cero. It is twice as powerful as a gran rey and can only be used during segunda etapa. It's a long range cero, usually reaching 15-20 meters in distance.

Cool down: 6 posts
Duration: 1 posts instant release


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PostSubject: Re: Zorro de la Tempestad   Fri May 21, 2010 2:12 pm

Valentina Volpe wrote:


Name - Tormenta del Juicio (Storm of Judgement)
Attributes: Damage
Class: Reiatsu
'
She leaps into the air and by spinning her body, her fur and tails
create a massive thunderstorm that takes on the form of a hurricane.
When it hits the opponent, it delivers nearly half a million volts of
pure concentrated electricity. The storm can cover nearly fifty feet,
but the majority of the damages is caused in the first fifteen feet of
the storm.'

Post Durations: 3 posts
Cooldown: 6 posts

this tech creates a thunderstom correct? define "when it hits the opponent". I assume you mean if a lightning bolt strikes the opponent but I'd like to be sure. if this is true, are the bolts randomly sent down or do you have some form of control over them such as in the segunda res.?

Name - Trueno Del Rugido (Thundering Roar)
Attributes: Damage
Class: Reiatsu
'
Valentina inhales deeply, then lets out a thundering roar that creates
a massive Shock wave. The blast can only reach about twenty feet in
diameter, but may do serious damage to those who are caught in range.
The attack is nearly fatal if it strikes at point blank range, but if
it strikes at a distance, it may only leave minor burns and lacerations
at the most'

Post Durations: 1 post
Cooldown: 3 posts

define near fatal for me, such as how much physical damage is done like you did later in the tech with minor burns/ lacerations

Looks:
The fur works also as heavy armor, strengthening her hierro to rival that of the Cero Espada.

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please don't compare your hierro to that of another players, it makes it vary way to much, simply say that it strengthens it or something along those lines, i didn't mention it in your first release to save time on my part but both need to be changed slightly

Special Ability: In her final form, Val can summon a thunderstorm out of even the
clearest skies, and gains full control over electricity. She calls down
the thunderbolts with specialized barks and growls, the intensity of
the bolt it decided by the intensity of her cry.

nothings wrong with this as long as you know you will need to explain how intense each cry is in a fight


[/b]Name:
El Granizo del Relámpago
Attributes: Damage
Class: Reiatsu
'The attack only can occur if she is airborne. Val lets out a
loud series of barks and howls, and releases a storm of five to ten
thunderbolts from her body. They surround an enemy while a large bolt
comes down the center to strike the trapped enemy'

Cool down: 6 posts
Duration: 3 posts

this duration is way to long considering the parameters of this attack. this should be a one post duration seeing as how it "traps the opponent" either that or drastically change how powerful it is.with this being said, you may also change the cooldown time to about 4 or 5, 6 turns is a long time in a fight
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PostSubject: Re: Zorro de la Tempestad   Fri May 21, 2010 2:53 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Zorro de la Tempestad   Thu May 27, 2010 4:07 pm

Duration and Cooldown on 1st Res special ability, and state how many needles she fires.
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PostSubject: Re: Zorro de la Tempestad   Thu May 27, 2010 4:48 pm

armond the special ability is a constant ability that can be used at any time, thus a duration and cooldown arn't needed, agreed on the amount however
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PostSubject: Re: Zorro de la Tempestad   Thu May 27, 2010 5:29 pm

The fact that she can just fire out needles after needles isn't okay. If it were something like a hardened hierro, or lightning control that'd be different. But it's a flat out attack.
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PostSubject: Re: Zorro de la Tempestad   Thu May 27, 2010 9:35 pm

i think you view of a ability is different from mine armond, I see an ability a constant aspect of the character, something they will always be able to do while a tech is a special form of said ability that requires some amount .but i will side with you on the basis that A.) she does need a total amount of needles B.) how long it takes for those needles to "grow" back. a duration isn't needed but I do advise on a cooldown after total amount has been fired.
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PostSubject: Re: Zorro de la Tempestad   Fri May 28, 2010 11:28 pm

Edited with new techs on First release and Segunda Etapa
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